Uhh, I'va got'ta hand you the truth dude...
Ok, honostly, it was a nice picture of a mule... for a 1 st grader, but seriously, I mean... Newgrounds is not going to care if you drew the picture when you were 7 years old. Ever if you were 4. It does not matter. Newgrounds look for nice, decient pictures, well animated, jointed legs, and not this kind of stuff. Work on the animation, try frame by frame, and you might get somewhere, also, fix the grammer. Ever though you copied it word for word (for some crazy reason) it should still look nice anyway, so fix it. Other than that... well, I normally put an "Other that that, the project is ok" type of thing in there, but this is just not going to get one from me. You really need to improve grammer and pictures, and, throughout the whole thing I head not one mule type sound. Just that really annoying backround music, which you might want to drop from your movie.